Tuesday, January 22, 2013


Ethos:
·      Normally I stand ridged and cross my legs, I need to walk around a little bit, move, to make it seem like I am more comfortable
·      Make eye contact with EVERYONE
·      Practice enough so if I loose my place I can just move on smoothly and not panic

Pathos:
·      I’m not looking to make these sad stories, but I want people to see how my life has changed in the past 6-7 months
·      Specific stories
·      Try to make them unique

Logos:
·      Outline:

1.     Introduction
a.     Thesis: Being the youngest in my family, I have always been able to look up to someone else. I haven’t felt real responsibility for myself until I moved away from home, and had to start over. I feel as if I have a new life, but parts of it are more underdeveloped than others.

2.     Body:
a.     Career:
                                                                                                     i.     Student life in a different state
                                                                                                    ii.     Story of rush week—most difficult week I’ve been through
                                                                                                  iii.     Being in a sorority/pledge class
                                                                                                  iv.     Not 100% sure what I want to do after college
b.     Family:
                                                                                                     i.     Youngest child
                                                                                                    ii.     Shy
                                                                                                  iii.     Looking up to my sister (nursing)
                                                                                                  iv.     Always had people to look up to (I watched their careers, looked at what they did, never really had to think about doing something different)
                                                                                                    v.     Only one to move out of state to go to college
                                                                                                  vi.     Proving myself to my family
                                                                                                 vii.     My maid of honor speech to my sister
                                                                                               viii.     Image: Picture I have of me as a little girl with my sister and all of her friends (to show how I kind of tagged along my whole life as the youngest, and now I don’t have that comfort zone, I am my own person)
c.      Entertainment:
                                                                                                     i.     All of my friends went to different schools—I knew no one coming to UK
                                                                                                    ii.     The social aspect of this life is just as important to me as the academics—you cant go anywhere alone
                                                                                                  iii.     Having a “family” of friends (sisters in my sorority)
3.     Conclusion:
a.     Summary/ tie it all together
b.     Why I stayed here

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